I already commented on the Flash itself, but I wanted to tell you not to get too discouraged by the feedback you're getting. You've admitted the flaws in it, and you've said it was a practice. My best suggestion would be, besides doing lots more practice, doing a bit of study. In particular, practice some more original character designs and study how real people move - the second one is a really important part of making believable animation.
I also mentioned the script issues, and I think that's something that a lot of Flash artists have a problem with, because they are first and foremost visual artists and so writing isn't always a strong point. It can help to get a friend to read the script - or even better, listen to you reading it out - to tell you where sentences sound forced, or where you're repeating yourself, or where something sounds out of character.
I'm sure you realise this, but just to make it clear - while most of what I've said here and in the Flash review is very critical, that's because I *liked* the Flash, and want to see you make something in the same vein, only better. I'd even like to see you remake this one in maybe a years' time, to see how much you improve. Learn from your mistakes, and grow from your experience.
roryblakemore
well done! 10th of the day this got! ;)
even tho i personally think anime is kinda gay, but i really liked it! :)
Jestercap13
um thanks, some animes i think are to but i really like the art style. but yeah thanks