ok well if you watch my newest animation, dont vote very high, it was just practice and ugh i dont think i should have posted it. i used images of anime to help me and im guess thats a no in animation, so sorry newgrounds. if you dont want to blam it if you feel like it. and please dont give it front page or any awards. i feel bad about it. my next animation will be more original next time. sorry NG
open your eyes, learn the truth of the world, live with it, live by it, and get use to it, because it isnt going a way. -----------Jestercap for contacting me try jestercap13 on myspace or jestercap.animations @gmail.com
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I already commented on the Flash itself, but I wanted to tell you not to get too discouraged by the feedback you're getting. You've admitted the flaws in it, and you've said it was a practice. My best suggestion would be, besides doing lots more practice, doing a bit of study. In particular, practice some more original character designs and study how real people move - the second one is a really important part of making believable animation.
I also mentioned the script issues, and I think that's something that a lot of Flash artists have a problem with, because they are first and foremost visual artists and so writing isn't always a strong point. It can help to get a friend to read the script - or even better, listen to you reading it out - to tell you where sentences sound forced, or where you're repeating yourself, or where something sounds out of character.
I'm sure you realise this, but just to make it clear - while most of what I've said here and in the Flash review is very critical, that's because I *liked* the Flash, and want to see you make something in the same vein, only better. I'd even like to see you remake this one in maybe a years' time, to see how much you improve. Learn from your mistakes, and grow from your experience.
thank you, this is very good advise my friend, even right now thats the kinda stuff im working on, i am going to be practiceing in flash for a while be for i post my next flash. and i thought the script was corny to, but as you said were more visual artist, i am a writer but not words i do poetry as you can see in my other flashes but yeah thank you.
roryblakemore
well done! 10th of the day this got! ;)
even tho i personally think anime is kinda gay, but i really liked it! :)
Jestercap13
um thanks, some animes i think are to but i really like the art style. but yeah thanks